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Chapter 28

When the rug has been pulled out from under you, when everything you believe in becomes twisted and distorted, how do you know what is real? 

 

Chapter 27

Alexander Sr. is at it again

 

Chapter 26

Not getting the backstory you want from AMC's great writers?

Give this a shot. Hope it meets with your approval. Comments good or bad are always welcome. Thanks for reading.

chapter 25

Chapter 24

Chapter 23
Sorry this one took so long. Hope you haven't lost interest.

Chapter 21
Chapter 22
On a roll this weekend, 2 chapters! Hope you enjoy and remember feedback or reviews are always appreciated.

Chapter 20

chapter 19 at last! It sure is hard to find time to write in the summer!
Hope you enjoy it and please don't be afraid to tell me what you think....I can take it!


Chapter 18 is up. It's my longest yet, hope I don't bore you. Thanks for reading and as always feedback is appreciated.
Chapter 18


Chapter 17 is finally up. Sorry this one took so long.
Please use link: Chapter 17

As always feedback is appreciated on either site or PM. Enjoy & thanks. - Jan




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OH, Jan. Just oh...Props to you, not much takes my breath away anymore.


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Oh no! Is this the end of Claire?  If so, I can see why Zach does what he does in a few years.  I really enjoy reading your perspective on Zach's past.  I look forward to the next update.

 

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Chapter 17 is finally up.  sorry it took so long.
Enjoy.

Please use link: What was Lost  Chapter 17


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Jan

 

Glad Alex is over the initial trauma, anyway.  And you just know the police aren't going to believe him, Sr.'s already made him out a crazy liar.  God I hate that man...so what's gonna happen  next??????

 

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Chapter 19 is up at last.

Feel free to throw any and all comments at me.  It is greatly appreciated.
Enjoy!

I'll try to be faster with the next chapter.


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HI Jan-

 

Another powerful chapter.  You've expressed very well the depths of evil and total amorality in which Alex was brought up.  The fact that his humanity wasn't irrevocably broken is a testament to the strength of his spirit. 

 

Your story of what might have happened in the past is very plausible.  And incredibly heartbreaking...

 

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Chapter 20

Hope you are enjoying this story half as much as I enjoy writing it.
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chapter 21

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On a roll. Please let me know what you think.

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Chapter 23

Sorry this one took so long.  Hope you haven't lost interest.
Please be free with comments....I can take it!

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Chapter 24

Hope you enjoy it.  Comments and reviews are always welcome and appreciated.

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This is so touching.  Keep up the good work.  You have a gift and thank you for sharing.


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Jan OMG.  I just finished 24...

 

Now that I've met you, and looked way into your eyes, I can see all the love and intelligence and feeling you bring to your writing.  I love and treasure the siblings you've given Alex, they are each other's only comfort in a family ruled by such a ruthless, amoral dictator. 

 

I would love to know you better, to know where all this comes from but for now, I'm just savoring it...keep up the good work, it's magic.

 


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Chapter 25 is up

I found this to be the darkest and most difficult chapter to write. I hope I have done it justice without pushing the envelope too far. - as always feedback is appreciated.


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Chapter 26

Not getting the backstory you want  from AMC's great writers?

Give this a shot.  Hope it meets with your approval.  Comments good or bad are always welcome.  Thanks for reading.


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Chapter 27

 

Alexander Sr. is at it again or should I say still.

Hope you enjoy comments and criticism is always wanted and appreciated.


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Jan, tonight I started to read chapter 1 and couldn't put my laptop away until I finished chapter 27. You truly have a gift in writing. What an insightful rendition of what could have made Zach/Alex the compassionate complex character we see in PV today. Your back-story is so plausible. Alexander Sr. as the cold tyrant father and Alexander Jr. the sensitive son defying his father's will to mold him in his own image. I hope the writers at AMC are as insightful and creative as you when they begin to give us Zach's back-story this coming month.


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Chapter 28

When the rug has been pulled out from under you, when everything you believe in becomes twisted and distorted, how do you know what is real? 

 

Thank you for the PM's so glad you guys are enjoying this.  Comments are always appreciated.

 

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